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bebong2005 56F
12258 posts
12/15/2008 5:46 pm
my first murder

There was this gorgeous natural pool between two mountains with cute, small waterfall descending from one side and a river with reasonable fast current down on the other with picturesque bamboo bridge across.
I like the place because it was kind of private, peaceful and the fauna and flora were simply breathtaking.

I was stripped down from the waist up and ready to hit the water when I saw her.
She didn’t see me at first, she was deep in thoughts concentrating on negotiating the narrow, steep path leading down to the pool. She was wearing a blue bikini with green and yellow flower pattern with a matching pareo tied around her hips. She was so beautiful “the sight of her almost took my breath away.

When she was almost at the bottom of the steps, she saw me. A strange mixture of surprise and fear (?) registered on her face. But that was only for a fraction of a second, she quickly pivoted on her heels and run!
But I was quick. I only wanted to stop her and talk, thinking this maybe my only chance to catch her alone, I simply cannot let her go away.

When I caught up with her, something I never planned happened, what I did was___ grabbed her, turned her towards me, pulled her closer and kissed her passionately.
It happened so fast she didn’t get the chance to react.
Why she must tasted so sweet and so soft to hold I right away lost control of myself?

I pulled her even more closer against me, she let a moan, she said: “Oh, Michael”
And went limp in my arms. My knees buckled, my legs turned to jell-o, my mind went blank, and suddenly the world had stop from turning. I heard thunder and lightning everywhere and“ I was stiff as a pole.

When I carried and laid her on the grass, she did not resist. It was starting to get dark. When I lay next to her; she closed her eyes and bit her lips. We kissed hungrily for a while, touching, exploring. I was only beginning to discover where everything is. I never realized that a kiss could taste like heaven I didn’t want to stop.

The moment I removed her bikini top, she gave me a look I never seen before anywhere or from anyone in my life. Not even on her. All I know was what the look did to my blood ‒ boil!
When I pulled the rest of the bikini all the way down, she clung to me passionately, we're like two people drowning; very fast and there was no tommorow.When I entered her, I thought I was going to pass out from ecstasy. It was good. No, better than good, better than anything I have ever experience so far, it was worth dying twice over.

When I murmured in her ear that I have no idea it would be like this, she said: “You don’t see nothing yet.” And she showed me. Not one, not twice, but six times over!
We laid side by side afterwards looking at the moon.
Then she said: “Now, what?”



~ Jolielaide


bebong2005 56F
9764 posts
12/15/2008 6:18 pm

this is from the book i wrote back on 2000
after a 3 month holiday in bicol

the sequel i wrote two years later

~ Jolielaide


poweroflove3 64F

12/15/2008 10:19 pm

ms bebs,

Really really good and so hot!!! You can really take them to that fantasy happening right there and there...brava

[I God is pure love...


bebong2005 56F
9764 posts
12/16/2008 6:13 am

    Quoting  :

just sharing my thoughts
and it's a bonus if there are people who could appreciate them
no matter how incomprehensible sometimes my ramblings are

~ Jolielaide


bebong2005 56F
9764 posts
12/16/2008 6:19 am

    Quoting poweroflove3:
    ms bebs,

    Really really good and so hot!!! You can really take them to that fantasy happening right there and there...brava
it's a true story
but the name of the lead character
the place do exists
it is in san roque, sorsogon
i wrote three connected yet independent from each other books about the place and the people i have met
two of them are in english

~ Jolielaide


bebong2005 56F
9764 posts
12/16/2008 8:11 am

yes it was

~ Jolielaide


bebong2005 56F
9764 posts
12/16/2008 8:11 am

that was the first time i really consider marrying someone

~ Jolielaide


poweroflove3 64F

12/16/2008 9:49 pm

ms bebs,

consider writing a book so the whole world can read it. not just here in FFF.

[I God is pure love...


bebong2005 56F
9764 posts
12/17/2008 5:36 am

i did already darling
under another name(s)
but it was too long ago
i'm out of inspiration lately
i have to suffer more i guess

~ Jolielaide