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On this Day  

lickquid

6/30/2009 4:05 pm

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9/20/2009 4:01 pm
For hearing my thoughts,
understanding my dreams
and being my best friend...
For filling my life with joy
and loving me without end...
..I do..

Here we stand today,
Like we always dreamed,
Starting out our live together.
Night is in your eyes,
Love is in our hearts,
I can't believe you really mine forever.

I feel rehearse in for this moment in all my life,
So don't act surprise,
If the feelings start to carry me away.

On this day,
I promise forever.
On this day,
I surrendered my heart..
Here I stand, take my hand,
And I will follow every word that i say
On this day..

Not so long ago,
This heart is just a fill,
of golden lonely space
without you..
Now everything's all right,
Now everything's refill,
And the story of my life,
Is all about YOU.

So if you feel the cold winds,
blowing through your nights.
I will shelter you and forever,
here, that tears and your fear
will fade away.

On this day,
I promise forever.
On this day,
I surrendered my heart..
Here I stand, take my hand,
And I will follow
every word that i say
On this day..

Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.
venusangel
2938 posts 

7/1/2009 6:07 am

 Beautiful!!!

tinker_viel
1064 posts 

7/1/2009 9:11 am

 wonder who she is
lucky gal
luckier apo lick
this is me...my heart and my soul...

Pretty_DoLL
62 posts 

7/1/2009 11:43 pm

 It sounds so real.
Boy, this is good work.
Thumbs up.
very inspirational,
i wish i had ur talent..
keep it up!!

DeepShine
62 posts 

7/4/2009 3:28 pm

 Lets play a silent battle,
I'll be the angel and you be my saviour.

Ash_Leigh
76 posts 

7/4/2009 4:24 pm

 Lick: I love it. It's beautiful.
I think you did a great job.
I love how your poetry has been changing...
it was sad and depressing and now
it shows promise and happy thoughts...lol
I'm so happy for you and I hope it just gets better....
I KNOW it would be A LOT better if you came down here....lol Well...I'll be talking to you...

mizz_terry
83 posts 

7/4/2009 5:54 pm

 You have such a gentle way of expressing yourself...
it's sounds so sweet and sincere!!!
I love this...great write!!!
What a lucky chick she is!!!

Spar_Q
64 posts 

7/4/2009 6:33 pm

 A heartfelt writing,
you've summed up your feelings for somebody
in a few stanza's , difficult to do.

well done.

May_k2k
71 posts 

7/4/2009 8:53 pm

 I loved the idea.
It's very unique, and meaningful as well.
It shows how sweet love can be-
as you fell in love,
your life was filled with happiness.
Very cute!

sarsicutie
85 posts 

7/7/2009 11:53 pm

 To be capable of steady friendship or lasting love,
are the two greatest proofs,
not only of goodness of heart,
but of strength of mind.

wengsky
77 posts 

7/9/2009 12:46 am

 Hmmmm... Its like a wedding prayers, nice job. God bless

SwitSensation
68 posts 

7/10/2009 7:21 pm

 You know you're in love when all you think about when you go to bed is that special someone, when all you do in your spare time is write their name on a peice of paper over and over again, when you're with that special someone, you get butterflies in your stomach and you get all excited. You know you're in love when they walk by and you try not to stare but you can't help it, all you talk about, to your friends, is that special someone; you talk on the phone for hours with the one you love.

TearyDropS
65 posts 

7/12/2009 1:45 am
    Quoting Spar_Q:
    A heartfelt writing,
    you've summed up your feelings for somebody
    in a few stanza's , difficult to do.

    well done.
It is UNVEILED,SIS
it is only with the heart that one can see rightly,
what is essential is invisible to the eye.
Good luck, lolo lei..mishu..take care.

TearyDropS
65 posts 

7/12/2009 1:51 am
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True love
is out there
and it looks
for no one.
So go get it.

jollypawn
99 posts 

9/20/2009 3:13 pm

 My all time fave song by David Pomeranz, just love it!

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