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My Dear Dad  

lickquid

6/13/2009 7:32 pm

Last Read:
7/9/2009 4:41 am



You've been everything to me: a father,
Teacher, playmate, model, conscience, friend.

Sometimes I'm not certain why you bother,
If your feelings on my words depend.

I know I haven't been the child I should:
Far from it, and I really can't say why.

I know exactly what I'd label good,
But in the real world something goes awry.

Underneath my actions there is love,
Gratitude, respect, and admiration.

Sometimes I don't know what I'm thinking of,
But I thank God you're in for the duration.

I'm sorry, sorry for the things I do,
But please believe I cherish MOM and YOU.

Thanks Dad, Get Well Soon,
HAPPY FATHER'S DAY

Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.
Sun_dot
86 posts 

6/14/2009 12:31 am

 Great rhyming, and very touching.
I could feel the solid rhythm all the way through.
Happy Father's Day, bro leo.

Bridgette85
71 posts 

6/15/2009 11:27 pm

 The greatest gift I ever had Came from God,
and I call him Dad!
Happy father's day bro,
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TOO!!

PinaiLove
78 posts 

6/18/2009 8:09 pm

 My father died many years ago,
and yet when something special happens to me,
I talk to him secretly not really knowing whether he hears,
but it makes me feel better to half believe it.

Happy Dad's day, bro..happy bday!!

Legaiah
160 posts 

6/18/2009 10:44 pm

 Daddy!!!! I Love you dad!
(to my father, who is in the hospital right now.)
We may not be together but we will never be through.

Ystilo_10
18 posts 

6/19/2009 10:23 pm
Such a wonderful piece of work
My Tatay is the same as yours
(at some point)
Our Dad, Daddy, Papa, Pa, Tatay and Tay
Doesnt even show it
But they trully love us
Its just sad that most of us cant be waht they want to be
At least if we cant be WHAT THEY WANT US TO BE, we should make them PROUD OF WHAT WE ARE NOW...

Im sure your dads proud of you Lick
Im going to make sure my Tatay would be proud of me too

KEEP SAFE

Wishing you, your father and your whole family good health and all the blessing God can give you

wengsky
77 posts 

7/9/2009 12:50 am

 Touched ako, I remember my TATAY.

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