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When you're GONE  

lickquid

3/14/2009 5:51 pm

Last Read:
10/2/2010 5:29 pm
Just because you're leaving
doesn't mean I'm letting go.

Hold onto love that is what I do,
now that I've found you.
And from above everything's stinking,
they're not around you.

And in the night,
I could be helpless,
I could be lonely,
sleeping without you.

And in the day,
everything's complex,
There's nothing simple,
when I'm not around you.

Hold onto my hands,
I feel I'm sinking,
sinking without you.
And to my mind,
everything's stinking,
stinking without you.

But I'll miss you when you're gone,
that is what I do.
And it's going to carry on,
that is what I do.


Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.
eb1209
23965 posts

3/14/2009 7:30 pm

 Stay in love, bro!..Go for what you think is right and what makes you happy!
Just call me ELZ, click eb1209

Stud_Lee
54 posts 

3/14/2009 10:14 pm

 Every time you let go of something limiting,
you create space for something better.

natz73
60 posts 

3/17/2009 5:00 am

 There are things that we never want to let go of,
people we never want to leave behind.
But keep in mind that letting go isn't the end of the world;
it's the beginning of a new life.

Bridgette85
71 posts 

3/17/2009 2:18 pm

 If a thing goes without saying -- let it.

Sun_dot
86 posts 

3/20/2009 3:03 pm

 I can't believe she's gone, I thought love would last but I was wrong.

still33
90 posts 

3/20/2009 6:43 pm

 Simply put it is a very magnificent piece of work.
I like the way it flows and the suspense
that added up until the very last line.
Very good, keep up the good work.

yukka
193 posts 

3/21/2009 2:49 pm

 Sooooooo very sweeeeeeeeeeeet!!!
i like it is smooth when i read it i felt comfort.
have a nice day, lolo lick..

DeepShine
62 posts 

3/26/2009 7:01 pm

 Can i keep you and never let you go?
Can i hold your hand and hug you tight?
Can i tell the world how lucky i am eo have you in my life?
or simply, can you be mine for the rest of my life?..

Spar_Q
64 posts 

3/29/2009 8:53 pm

 For everything you have missed,
you have gained something else,
and for everything you gain,
you lose something else.

TearyDropS
65 posts 

4/4/2009 3:42 am

 You are not gone, but you are not here.
At least that's the way it seems.

ninjakid
54 posts 

6/6/2009 9:20 pm

 Love is the shortest distance between hearts.

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